All Comments on 'The Trouble with Roommates'

The context was different and that's a good thing. I don't think I like any of the characters though.

I actively dislike all three of them.

Interesting concept. Chris seemed awfully needy, I think I would make both guys confident and strong, but maybe different sexually, or in the way they relate to her, one gentle, the other more aggressive. I don't think either guy would have let things drop there, I think they both would have continued to pursue her and make it harder for her to make a decision. Anyway, that's just what I think. I enjoyed it anyway.

You made an intriguing start and left us wanting for an ending but left hanging. Not good form at all!!!

It was building up pretty good then seemed like you wanted it to end. Like turning in a writing assignment late to school

I think you told a nice story, realistic in it's situations. And to the uncomplimentary commenters may I say, Fair warning was given, I feel like this could be part of an ongoing story...

And her NOT giving it up to the roommate seems natural as well, since he isn't her boyfriend, he just saw her naked accidentally and also started something that led to the couple into breaking up. Probably falsely by his own admission, so the revenge sex angle isn't just going to be automatic. Use this as an opening to the ongoing story of The Sexual Emancipation of Adrienne.