All Comments on 'The Twelve Lays of Christmas Ch. 07'

by BrettJ

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marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
Great Conclusion!!!!

That was a great conclusion to the story. I like how you brought all the characters together in the final chapter. I would like to see another sequel to the story where Cheri

introduceS Thomas to the Swans. That would be nice. This was another great chapter for you. Have a good holiday and merry Christmas.

alee5080alee5080about 12 years ago
Loved it. More please!!!!

Touching story. I've enjoyed many of your stories since I found the LIT site. More of Cherie as she un-stuffies Tommy. Maybe a wild get together with the Swans?

camr4656camr4656over 10 years ago
Five PLUS five starts!!

Thank you. You done extremely well!!! One of your better stories. Have a great New Year!!

racfguyracfguyover 9 years ago
Wonderful!

What a great ending! I am glad that everything turned out as it did. I was concerned in earlier chapters that Cherie might burn Tommy badly, because of her bi/lez activities.

Brett, I would be interested in more chapters - perhaps something about that 25th anniversary.

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