by Ashson
A well - Deserved Comeuppance Coming?
Will the overconfidence of evil meet its comeuppance in the ironic ending to an outrage?
The O.Henry Twist in Dark Erotica
I don't usually lend approval to Dark Erotica. With this story, ASHETON introduces a twist of fate worth of the famed short story writer O.Henry.
Mark is an angel at home and becomes rabid abroad. On vacation, he a martial arts expert ravishes twins, once with Twin B watching,then on a second occasion with twin A onlooking.
On return home where he's the local sweetheart, Mark learns a new neighbor has moved in next door: A muscle bound Marine drill instructor.
It's a twist worthy of any of the masters of the ironic twist in the ending, O.Henry, Sterling or Hitchcock if there were to have written a piece of dark erotica.
I always love your twists at the end, and this time was no different! Another great story from the master. ~~ JB
Unpleasant story even with the twist. Utterly un-erotic, sorry.
"There was a lot of protection offered to the boy next door. Even if a photo of him appeared as a suspected rapist, no-one would believe for a moment that it was him."
Good story, but utterly stupid comment. You have no idea how fast people will turn on someone over a charge of multiple rapes, especially when the victim(s) in question are a pair of cute little Twins-Next-Door. It's one of the unpleasant advantages crazy women enjoy. It doesn't even matter if you didn't really do it unless you can prove that you didn't. They win, because they're women.