All Comments on 'The Twins Ch. 02'

Very good a little short but good.

Good progress - the narrative was a little "smoother" this time. I'm curious about the "mom" part, but I guess you'll get to that. I would have liked a bit more delving into their increasing feelings for each other. While incest sex may be hot, it is even more immersive if their loving relationship is wrapped around it. 4*

I can hardly wait for the next chapter and to see what mom actually does.

Fab cunt lapping, just how I like it, I adore cunt and cunt juice. Brill but let’s quickly get to the real fucking. Cunt lapping sex maniac U.K.

The novella is called "Twins."

And in the beginning it was a story about twins and their feelings. Things change from there.

The author seems to have decided to exclude Alex from the active characters. He's destined to be

the role of "living dildo" on demand and covering up family secrets. I think it's a

a great tragedy for him, leading to moral degradation, psychological

trauma and even death.

Alex needs to take matters into his own hands, to be a leader, not a follower. Become an Alpha.

Then his relationship with his sister, his sister and her roommate, or just

with his roommate has a chance to live and grow.

Ellie doesn't understand this yet because of her age, and her mother and aunt only think about lust.

The father is not an example.

Alex's death, moral or physical, will also be a tragedy for Ellis.

S&M fantasies with her father are unclear at all.