All Comments on 'The Twins Ch. 03'

Beautifully told! I would like to hear more of their thoughts on how they feel about each other. Clearly, they have sibling love for each other but are they crossing to true love. What is the mother going to say? Is she interested in them as well? Much more to explore, I hope... 5*

She should forget any birth control. They should start a family together

Loved it, hope there is more.

4/5

Only just found you, but what a find. Just a thought I think Alex is a bit reticent, not much dialogue in what is after all a mutual journey of discovery. Mum's attitude is a bit intriguing. 5 stars. Love it.

Loved it, absolutely beautiful fucking session, so fucking hot. Cunt lapping sex maniac U.K.

The novella is called "Twins."

And in the beginning it was a story about twins and their feelings. Things change from there.

The author seems to have decided to exclude Alex from the active characters. He's destined to be

the role of "living dildo" on demand and covering up family secrets. I think it's a

a great tragedy for him, leading to moral degradation, psychological

trauma and even death.

Alex needs to take matters into his own hands, to be a leader, not a follower. Become an Alpha.

Then his relationship with his sister, his sister and her roommate, or just

with his roommate has a chance to live and grow.

Ellie doesn't understand this yet because of her age, and her mother and aunt only think about lust.

The father is not an example.

Alex's death, moral or physical, will also be a tragedy for Ellis.

S&M fantasies with her father are unclear at all.