All Comments on 'The Two Vessel Operation'

Wow awesome...can’t wait for more....

No patience - bad story - worse execution.

- God Almighty! -- the friar exclaimed. -- What atrocity! What did you do then?

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English uses quotation marks and ONLY quotation marks! Just look in any book.

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"God Almighty!"the friar exclaimed. "What atrocity! What did you do then?"

Interesting start.

Need some more before I evaluate this one.

Pretty badass

A perfect start, practically Lovecraftian in tone.

5*

Thank you for taking the time, the second section is a lot harder to translate. As you have noticed, there are some traps, and I wanted to simplify some parts that were written in medieval language, but that I would not know how to express equivalently in English. I think I will publish the remaining parts (probably two) within a week. The first part is just a setup. Once the details of the ritual becomes clearer, it will become more to Literotica: part 1 is quite chaste.

All that build up for a shitty non ending? And where was the wife? No wife in this...