All Comments on 'The Ultimate Desire Dress'

I wonder if women /really/ do have these kinds of fantasies and act on them very often. Picking up the random guy and whatnot.

Very good read, seemed really genuine.

I'll be reading the other chapters very soon!

Creative use of the champagne. Very erotic!!

I loved her thoughts and feelings as she dressed herself. That was a great bit of creativity, restricting her to entirely nonverbal communication. Your ability to transport your readers into the world of your imagination is exceptional. I felt as sexy as she did, and really lived in her body as they touched each other. Thank you for writing and sharing this.