All Comments on 'The Underground'

by Venusinaphrodite_

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BobbieSherBobbieSherover 2 years ago

Very well written and flows nicely. You make the unbelievable believable. Looking forward to more stories.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

That was so arousing, even as a male I could feel the tension building in her, wanting it to last but at the same time wanting that glorious release. Excellent.

Venusinaphrodite_Venusinaphrodite_over 2 years agoAuthor

BobbieSher that is such an amazing compliment! Thank you so much! I'm glad you've decided to join me for the ride

Venusinaphrodite_Venusinaphrodite_over 2 years agoAuthor

Naughtyand4u thank you! I'm glad to get your opinion from a male's perspective reading it and that the tension cane across🙏🖤

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Whether it's acting out fantasies, a slowburn of sexual tension, or a romantic night of passion, These erotic stories and oneshots are all told as though they're spilling from YOUR lips. It's Just You and Me and the possibilities are endless... So I'll have a seat and you te...