All Comments on 'The Undertow Prologue'

If this is the prologue, the following chapters will be sensational

A deeply beautiful and seemingly simple story that holds such deep emotion and feelings. Bravo!

At this point it just seems to me the writer just reskins her previous works. This feels less like someone comfortable in their niche and more like someone who just refuses to grow.

My prediction: By the end of this work the 'goddess' character will be all powerful and have a harem of women and the boyfriend/husband character(s) will be cuckolds with a humiliation fetish (and quite possibly transformed by magic or science into transwomen.) Just like all the writer's other works.

This is beautiful

lovely. original.

Wow! A very intense start! I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!

Amazing! I’m hooked