All Comments on 'The Unexpected Romance Ch. 02'

Welp, by making Holden a werewolf, you have killed off all interest I had in this story.

I was hoping that for a human male x female werewolf story in which the male STAYS human.

But I guess that won’t be happening. Maybe one day someone will make said story.

No offense, anon, but unless you commission someone, it's not their job to write exactly what you want. You're free to write something if you can't find it.

Now, as for the story, it's interesting enough, maybe a little rushed, but not bad. I'll keep reading. A few grammatical errors and some strange phrasing, but not the worst I've seen; if you're planning on writing more, maybe look into the editor program on-site here. Admittedly, it's not too bad for short installments like this, though

A good story so far. I wonder what come's next after their round 2. And is this gonna be a short story series focused on sex or a long story series with multiple elements and multiple entries.

Good short story. Keep the story lines going as I’ll be sure to read them!