All Comments on 'The Unholy Whale Ch. 03'

by WisemanT

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"in reality, extremely inept," huh? Sounds like that universe is losing a good guitarist... unless the Blank Attribute can make music the exception somehow? ("Every sound she makes is arousing music to the ears" or somesuch?) Or if the ineptitude only applies to her "shinobi" trait?

Regardless, the real-but-changed, yet also-erased-from-the-world angle is the most interesting thing about this story, and I hope we'll get to explore it a lot more in the coming chapters!

WisemanTWisemanTover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback. Xue Mei's musical prowess did in fact disappear due to that Attribute, even if it's (so far) only been alluded to in the opening paragraph of Chapter 4. Hope you're happy with how the story has explored the interplay between "simulacrums" and the girls in the cards in the following chapters.

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