All Comments on 'The Unknown Lord'

Is clearly not your native tongue.

enjoyable story,shame you could not find an editor,they could have corrected your gramer well done though , look forward to chapter 2

This is a test I think you would have failed, if it were conducted in English. Even War And Peace would be unreadable if written as poorly as your story. Please, get some assistance.

I'm no expert about the use of punctuation...believe me. That said,even I know that an entire paragraph should have some form of punctuation in it's make up.....somewhere. Other than that....not bad at all.

Your story needs a plot. As initial comments, you need to use a spelling checker that can differentiate between different synonyms or homonyms and you need to learn how to maintain verb tense and number agreement! Once those problems are fixed, this story will be good enough to be shredded for all the other things wrong with it!

Something went very very wrong here. Did you write this story while smoking weed or something??? How in the fucking world did it even get approved? ... Shit O.O my brain hurts from reading this

I liked it. Well written, thought out, and presented.