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by jerrys1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
GO FOR IT!

Go for it. My wife and I have, and we're both ecstatic over the thrill that we've gotten. We've done it enough times that I now get to suck his cock to prep him, and then guide it into her cunt. We both love each other more than ever and can hardly stand it till her next bout of cucking me. GO FOR IT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
'Having a dream' is a bit of a lazy cliche

and never really works for me. Hope it does for others. The last line was intrigueing though. Hints at that emotional lurch in the solar plexus when you discover the wife and the guy you made friends with the night before and brought home to carry on the party. Old school but fun, especially if you manage to find a new twist for it. Now you know you're gonna get some stick for that horrible title, it'll draw 'em out like moths to a flame. Keep writing...Mancelt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
loved this!!!

please continue master!!!!

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