The Unspoken Society Pt. 04: Members

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Traci lowered her voice. "Justin, you do things to me. Naughty things. You have a key to my body, and I love being a bad girl with you. So take advantage of your poor, innocent girlfriend. She puts up a front, but she secretly loves it."

"Message received, girlfriend." To emphasize the point, I cupped her ass and pushed my fingers down the center of her jeans. Traci let me, even though we were in a public place. A blush covered her face, but she had a little smile leaking through the side of her mouth. I moved my hand to her waist and pulled her in close, bumping her hips.

"Now, where was I?" She made a big show of pondering.

"Oh yeah, one last thing. You've not asked about Eric and me."

"Traci, I don't see it as a quid pro quo. You and Eric might decide to have a relationship. It might look different than what we discussed with Monica. It might be the same. I trust you to talk to me about it when you're ready. I'm binding my heart to yours, so I'm confident that we can work through the implications. And yes, I know there could be some issues and disagreements in the future. But I trust our love to carry us through them. We may decide that our relationship with Monica and Eric is causing us pain, and we have to end it with them. I hope that doesn't happen, but we will deal with things as needed."

"I don't think it will happen either, Justin. But thanks for sharing that. And I expect that Eric will have a conversation with you about a second boyfriend situation, but I'll let that unfold if and when it's time. Now, I think we've even reached my limit for heavy relationship conversations. Let's look up that dinner you've been dangling out there, and then let's celebrate our love for each other using only non-verbal communication."

"I love that type of relationship conversation."

"I figured you would, boyfriend."

We started walking to Traci's place while I marveled at the direction my life had taken in the past few weeks. I knew that it was only the beginning.

*******

And this forms a natural break for the story. More will come in time, where Traci and Justin fully experience the club and grow together.

I wrote this story to explore what it might look like if such a club existed. Given the swinging lifestyle out there, I do think there's a set of college students who would thrive in this environment if given the chance. I think they would be self-confident, successful students who could see life at several layers, including fun, sexy, friends as well as a deep primary relationship where they cared enough to let go of possessiveness. We'll see how Traci and Justin navigate this as future chapters unfold.

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I agree with another anon poster. A little editing is need, but not much. You reversed a couple of names here and there. (It happened in part 02 as well, as I recall.)

Also, did you mean 'horse cry' as in whinny, or 'hoarse cry', as in breathless exclamation?

moedik2moedik24 months ago

A really deep journey toward a loving relationship full of twists and turns. I really enjoyed it so far and look for ward to more.

Grail1223Grail12235 months ago

The story was fun and well written. But the 2nd girl/boy friend goes against what the club seems to be about. IMO, keep the club at the club, otherwise it's a polyamory story which is a very different animal.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well thought out and believable story. Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very well thought out and good presentation. Now to keep it on track.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago
more please

well developed charactors and location ..U can add more people or go to other campuses the framework for many storys is layed run with it :)

jwswinglejwswingle5 months ago

Direction still good. Will the club just be vasual, wanted but non binding sex and lust? Will some-or all-of it bend towards polyamory? Will the girls get more total added relationships (FFM, FF, FFF?) than the guys do? You know, let's just sit back and enjoy the show, and the self-discovery.

CatHouseGuy20CatHouseGuy205 months ago

Mixed feelings about the whole society thing. Besides having sex with many other "attractive" people, the "club" sure seems to have almost unreachable goals of affecting all aspects of the member's lives. Then there was the line about "we will hook you up with people". Hold on...isn't the basic tenant aligned with swinging is "No means No". Plus want them to have date nights with other members. Seems like decisions that our couple should only make for themselves. No matter how thorough the entry process, not every member will be an outstanding human and not every person appeals sexually to others....that comes down to individual tastes.

The writing is well done, the idea of the society is interesting. The sexual scenes have been well done without going overboard. Perhaps my mixed feelings come back to just how quickly and easily Justin and Traci have adapted and jumped in. Seems like most 20 year old couples would have more angst and minor issues when taking the huge leap that this society will entail.

sumnermartinsumnermartin5 months ago

I think this is the kind of introspective inquiry that all couples need to have. Not having discussions about how you fit together as a couple lead to misunderstandings that ultimately result to divorce or at least breakups. Thank you for raising this issue.

LenardSpencerLenardSpencer5 months ago

Your writing ability is great. Thank you. For this overall story, it passes the realistic stage and climbs into a fantasy stage. There is absolutely no way that a group of College age students, hormones still flying hard, have the emotional maturity to indulge in what you've outlined. Now if there were University faculty involved, older and with a much greater Life experience level that has fostered what might be called the more "deviant" explorations of sexuality and relationships, then it might be more believable. Also, being pedantic, the sheer cost of setting up this type of "Society/Club" is way outside what College/University students could afford. Unless they are all Trust Fund kids and "Mummy and Daddy" are very rich, funding everything for them.

Still, let's not let reality interfare with a good story. Cheers.

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