All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 22'

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DragonDreamerDragonDreamerover 15 years ago
Fabulous!

I'm so glad to see this story continuing. I think I was going through withdrawal for a while there. I thought this section was particularly well written.

Rad'lRad'lalmost 14 years ago
One comment -

looks lonely so I'll add another. This was an excellent chapter; I enjoyed it very much. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Oh my...

Lovely chapter!

SylithSylithalmost 8 years ago
In Fantasy Anything is ok

The glorious thing about fantasy is it is just that. No need for safe or sane protection from STDs which really opens up possibilities. Also is sad when something seems so written like abus model it almost seems like it could be done until reality reemerges.

I think that is why personally i prefer my fiction to be, well more fantastical but this is a really good story and very well written too.

SashiraSashiraover 6 years ago
i found a way to link to ch 22

indirectly to the right those links, but hopefully the other links will be put back that are missing when you google, oh an Diane calling herself a whore, that;s not something she ever did others did but she never did it. She is finally getting over her self esteem issues and knowing her self worth so it is unlikely she would refer to herself in such negative ways anymore. she is a wonderful slave and knows it, she has a value that she didn't have before and she knows it and its not for being a fucking whore, don't insult the slaves that way anymore[slut is something you can say even to a wife if they like dirty talk and she's horney easily but whore no]

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