All Comments on 'The Vassal Academy Ch. 28'

As always, well written and the plot keeps evolving... keep going.

Always the best part of a new month!

Thoughtful, descriptive and sensual as always. More please!

certainly captured, and kept, my attention. The new characters are developing well and the plot is still on the boil. Thanks.

And Yet Another One - that really moves along nicely, and with your style of writing has one immersed into the story right away, even if one hasn't read one/a few older chapters just beforehand (no critics on chaptertiming, just a praise that it's really easy to get into the flow of the story again!)

Please keep up the good work

Cheers

-Shaya

I have read each and every chapter written. It's well done and moved along wonderfully. A good sense of what a Master/slave relationship really entails. It's not just bondage and sex. Wonderful Job! Waiting patiently for more submissions

So glad to have more of the Vassal Academy! I hope the next chapter is coming out soon - I've been dying waiting for this one, checking everyday, and then got so swamped with work and such that I missed three days and find a treasure on my return. Thanks so much!

Captivated from the first word on, another great piece!! waiting anxiously for the next chapter, keep them coming!