All Comments on 'The View in the Mirror'

How sad that even this fantasy world, a woman should be debased and spoilt and humiliated in this atrocious manner!!

What a delightful exploration of her modified body and the submission that it represents.

The scene is quite evocative, yet I'd have liked to get a little more insight why Adele puts up with all this. Simply being used to act obedient seems a little weak as a motive ...

Really good story. I doubt most of those piercings would work, but still a wonderful erotic story. Please do more.

I know it is only fiction as I am sure some of the modifications would not work long, such as the nipple shield attachment and d ring in the tongue, but still a great story, super erotic. I suppose she is lucky David is not into tattoos, that would give him endless scope for body adornments, but perhaps that could be another story. As it is fiction then I suppose he wife puts up with it, in real life she would wait and divorce him ( a woman in Switzerland did exactly that, when she kept being led by a nose ring), but it is only a story.

Really evocative and interesting. Can picture it in my mind and would be interested in reading more about her day to day life and other changes to her form

Great! I love all the piercings done on Adele - perhaps there are a few more ideas to be realized on her: what about maybe cheek piercings or dimples? They could be connected to her tongue for example...