All Comments on 'The Villa Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Why

you had to make it so convoluted i have no idea.

the story started with brother sister in villa now there's 10 or so women sisters cousins mothers a sick father(should tell us what his illness is )

its chapter 8 yet the story's original characters(bro/jack sis/chloe) are yet to do anything bar him cum on her

also taken 7 chapter for any sex & it wasn't chloe & jack

one thing i can't get over & not believable at all

in an early chapter chloe jack maria were all nude tell each other their virgins yet nothing happens

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