All Comments on 'The Village Sluts Ch. 22-24'

This story is very good, hope you have a lot more chapters in store

Throughout chapters 1-24, your spelling is extremely poor and it diminishes the reading pleasure of your target audience. I strongly suggest you use the services of an experienced, competent and highly literate editor/proofreader.

Nice story. Whens the next part

I love your story. Can’t wait for the next part.

I like how someone reads 24 chapters and then complains about “extremely poor” spelling. If it was that bad they would have given up. There are a few typos but not so bad that you can’t work out what you meant to type. In general the quality of the story is very good and the occasional mistake doesn’t ruin anything. Especially as this is free and you are making good content so quickly for us. Don’t listen to the haters.

At teh

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Hallo S. Gary 3434!

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Well I'm right again, regardless of what the 'story tag' says, no straight male can write a lesbian sex stories, without adding a little male-cock in to fuck it up!

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Queen Jackie and I, read about 2 thirds of the way through, stopping at 'Chapter 24: First Time.' ... So we are only giving it 4-stars.. Sorry too much cock in your lesbian sex story, for two dykes!

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!