All Comments on 'The Violet Rose Society'

Introducing an elaborate scifi set up - a bit longish on detailed descriptions but short on action or interactions. So stand alone it is lacking appeal.

The laid out plot scenario looks promising, though. Thus, I hope future chapters will add lots of suspense, entertainment and erotic thrills. Then it might become a great tale.

very interesting premise, but it would be much better if the girls had a way to fight back and turn the tables on these losers!

This is as really promising start and I like where it is heading. But I really wish there was some sex in this first chapter. Don't get me wrong, the story is good. But this is a smut site. Fine literature will never be properly praised on here unless there is some raw dog pounding involved, ya feel? But really good start and keep up the great work :)

This was great world-building, but I would want to see more action, some actual sex. Otherwise, right up my alley though. Are you planning more?

Well built scenario. No noticeable plot holes for now.