All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 10'

Excellent story...we just loved us writings.. continue asap

Most excellent if too short.

I guess that i have more faith in your readers than you do. I'm quite confident that if you had gone ahead and started Brent's POV instead of ending Ginny's here, that your audience would be cognizant to the change. You start each POV with their names anyway. We know who's narrating because you told us straight up. You haven’t even posted Chapter 11 yet and I already know that it's going to switch to Brent's narrative. 🙄

I know that I'm not going to convince you to change your mind. I wouldn't either this deep into the story. You're already committed to your course of action. But it doesn't make it any less irritating for a lot of your readers. 😃

Thank you, YSS166! The next chapter is all fire and works. I'll have it up this weekend for you 😁

Thanks ST! Ohh I have faith in you all, but I also like to torture you a little. You know from my stories I'm a little bit sadistic, after all. I want to make you all squirm... through writing lol. And yes, you're right! This weekend, it's Brent's turn. Bring some tissues, but not for tears 🤠😜💦

I've just read through the series in a rush and the tension build up to this next chapter where I very much hope we'll get to enjoy a happy reunion and rekindling has been wonderful. Plus you're amazing at writing Tom to be the most unlikeable jerk imaginable. 😜 Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you Jhlieberman. I hope you have a chance to check out the next chapter and enjoy it! :)

Tom is a jerk with a capital J and no woman in her right mind would have him, as he destroys any kind of affection Ginny could have for him with his no-holds-barred bravado, like he is the only guy that will ever matter and she exists only to service him. Revolting!

Olivia saying she's suing Starstrucks is a bald-faced lie, but it telegraphs to both Quinn and Ginny what's there--Beau; for a female that prides herself on being colossally intelligent and shrewd, she's remarkably obvious and stupid.

Bit of a low blow on the receptionist nearly causing Ginny a heart attack by not hearing her name right; Ginny's facing too much stress already by meeting him that she doesn't need more.

Normally I'd have trouble with such short installments, but you've managed to pack enough punch in each chapter that it feels long enough with all the pathos and angst you build in each. 5

Hey, Com. The great thing about Tom, is he's like the hero of his own story. Everything has been given to his life. He's not used to having to work for anything, and it shows. He definitely doesn't deserve Ginny. There will be more... Tomplications to come!

Tom continues to show his true colors. I'm surprised neither of the two have figured out Olivia has an ulterior motive for them not to visit the coffee bar. Wonder if Brent will reveal himself? Reading on to find out. 5⭐