All Comments on 'The Virgin Mum Pt. 01'

Is this your first attempt at writing or your first for Literotica? In either case a job well done. Can’t wait for more.

Tremendous and very well written story. And so very believable. Very much one of my favourites, now. Thank you and eagerly looking forward to succeeding chapters.

Fantastic introduction to your future portfolio in Literotica. Well done. She should always remember that not everyone posts a thank you and that the idiots that post negative comments are usually the ones who never do anything but complain. You could continue with this couple or start a new story. You certainly have me as a fan. Thank you.

Kudos to an awesome tale! 5 stars!

I can’t wait for the next chapter! Great work!

Excellent and with tenderness, feeling and skill. Please continue with this story. Thank you.

They need to continue fucking each other. Mom may also find other lovers-perhaps a bbc.

Nicely done! An enjoyable mother-son love story. Your focus is obviously to create a tender love story, which you have done. You have also planted the seeds of more wild sexual encounters. Nice balance between the romantic and erotic. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops.

Awesome work … I’m looking forward for more romantic, loving and erotic mother/son-encounters. Please go one more then five stars.

Wonderful!

Really well written, 5/5. Great descriptions of emotions and feelings. I felt like a conception, or two, was coming. Please keep future chapters of this story monogamous. If you are going to write about Mom and other lovers please start a new story and put it in a different category. Thanks for a great story!

Great job on your first story!! Now mum can get what she's been missing and needing from her son, again, and again, and again!

Very good story. Please continue.

So, so sexy😍

very tender and beautiful story! just loved it !

Incredibly well written. Hot and highly stimulating. Incredible story for your first effort. Hope you write more of the same.

I enjoyed it ⁸ívery much. It brought some memories.

Do continue the story with tenderness like you're doing but that shouldn't stop them to try everything, orally and anal would be great. A tender ass fuck would be lovely.

Very good and very sexy..I remember vividly the first time seeing mom in a simple white bra and how instantly I became just rock hard..she saw and understood the power she had..beyond hot..

JT

Love the buildup. Just the right pace. Looking forward to more.

What an interesting saga! I hope it continues for years!