All Comments on 'The Visitor'

by MsBeaX

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chiefhalchiefhalalmost 4 years ago

Enjoyed it, your writing shows promise.

Crusader235Crusader235almost 4 years ago
Good

Good start, and very well written. Can't wait for Thanksgiving when Matt visits, (with his girlfriend)? That should be interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

did this guy seriously let his sister get fucked in front of him and just sit there? this is supposed to be hot? that's the most pathetic excuse of a person i have ever seen or read anywhere. And that sister, i thought she was regretting what she did in the past or that maybe she had feelings for him, nope in the end she just wanted wanted to humiliate him and let him see her get screwed

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