All Comments on 'The Vow of Obedience'

Interesting ethical and spiritual conundrum. Divorcement may come but, of course, at a high cost particularly as wife can now share the husband's benefit.

Intriguing as always — silly riddle saved by the ending.

I'll not grade this effort. From a technical view it is well done, at least to my eye. However, the story is a bit too esoteric for me.

God I hope this is satire, but on this site, who the hell knows.

Love these type of stories but now I feel badly for the wife.

Next chapter

A little turgid, but I finally puzzled it out.

Well, Weldon ended up more despicable at the end. He was merely an ass at the beginning.

I dont understand the ending.