by Jappio
A well-written tale that had a lot of ground to cover to remain interesting, which it did, right up to the very last word. Very well done and thank you for this fascinating story, for which 5 *s seems paltry!
I hope you will write for us again soon.
Wow, what a great ending. A Happy Ending. You've become better and better as you write. Keep this style going. I was going to say "keep this up" or "keep them coming", but double en tendre and all. :-)
Can we get more stories like these please? Your newer stuff is ok, but I still like older ones best. And new submissions now a days kinda suck really bad
This whole series had me from the get-go! I have to admit to having fantasies very much akin to what our heroine went through. And congratulations to Jappio for such a gentle and satisfying conclusion. Well done, my friend!
Annie Nonnomous