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And then, after a million years, the storm subsided. My cock twitched inside her, dribbling the last vestiges of my sperm and she slowed her gyrations and we became still. I could feel her cunt trembling around me and she was moaning softly in wonder, her hands gripping my legs and her eyes glazed with pleasure.
And after a while she lifted herself up and my cock slipped free. She regarded herself in the mirror, eyeing her pussy to see if my cream was oozing out, but it was too far inside her body. And so she lay next to me with her face close to mine, the strands of her hair tickling my cheek and she pressed her mouth to mine for little kisses, like hot honey drizzled on my lips. I smoothed back the damp hair from her forehead and looked into her eyes that were soft with love.
"God, Jack." Her voice was gusty and tremulous. "Christ! I never knew...I didn't -"
My fingers touched her skin, sliding over her shoulder and upper arm, feeling the goose-bumps on her smooth flesh and her love juices drying on my skin.
"I've wasted so much time," she whispered. "If I had known it was that good -"
I held her close. "We have time, Amie. You and me. This is just the start."
Her fingers brushed my lips as softly as a sleeping breath. "Oh, I know, Jack," she whispered, "and we're going to make use of every second of it."
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoAbsolutely sucking fucking fabulous. His sister has such a fabulous red hot cunt, ripe and ready for unbridled incestuous fucking. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.
Comentarista82over 1 year agoI've rarely read any way of describing a man filling a woman the way Jack filled Amie--in such poetic and flowery imagery. Nice twist and a nice touch.
Really most of this hinged on Amie eavesdropping (made sense once she described what she did as a teen when Jack was gone) and her misunderstand what Jack meant; the rest stemmed from her hating Jack for not staying in touch (implying she crushed on him long ago and he never knew it). Thanks for unraveling her so we understood why she thought as she did, and it opened the door for Jack to walk into a scenario he didn't think would unfold.
Do hope there will be more, as she was plain about "I'm not safe," so with all that he put into her...I'm thinking she's pregnant and there's going to be fallout. Would be interesting to see what changed her mind, to accept that.
Vividly told, with appropriate angst and emotion. Well written. 5.
Anonymousover 1 year agoExcellent! I'll check out your other work too. Pay the troll no mind. Sad they have so much hate. I wish they could be sorted out though. 10 stars each if I could, 5 for sure!
Anonymousover 1 year agoIt was pretty apparent that the main character's initial assessment of his sister was incorrect but as the story progressed that came out anyway. Writing was very strong and descriptive. The story heated up quickly but didn't seem rushed. 5 stars
(Can't place it but the story seemed too polished or too ornate though.)
Anonymousover 1 year agoRead this on some other site, or something pretty much identical - a shame really because I enjoy your previous stories and when seeing your name had submitted a story I was looking forward it...BUT, couple of paragraphs in?...was all too familiar - still, a good story though
