All Comments on 'The Water Nymph Ch. 14'

I have enjoyed the series immensely and it was a little disconcerting that you paused for so long mid telling. Glad you came back to finish the story.

That, of course, was just one week of life in LARP. The characters you created were real enough to be believable and I feel that you could probably use them again, probably as already hinted at, with the three monthly invitations.

Well done. It was always worth more that just five measely stars.

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Devir Ginator

i love this story and would love to read more from you

Once again I apologize for the long pause in writing the story. I actually lost access to everything for a while, and I truly appreciate the fans that have encouraged me.

What a treat! This series has been almost perfect. Jeopardy, enchantment, but still in the real world, and so erotic. Very refreshing to read about some different people too; I like nerds :)

I think this may be my favorite erotica on this entire site. I'm an avid LARPer, and have never encountered anything even approaching this (and doubt I ever will), but it's given me a whole new set of fantasies.

This is exactly the kind of erotica I’ve been craving. Didn’t know I needed this until now. You’re an excellent writer and DAMN even your words are sexy. That doesn’t make sense but I hope you get it. I for one and also very content with the chapters regarding consent. Every scene with group sex was different too. Which is hard to create. Continue writing please. I beg for more! I feel like you could do something compelling with erotic horror

This was the hottest story I have read in a long time. Please produce more similar content! If you published a story like this on amazon I would buy it!

One of my favorite series on the site. I came back for a reread and enjoyed it even more. Thanks for a very well crafted yarn.

Keep writing.

At some pointed I stopped reading this for the sex and really wanted to know how they were going to defeat the necromancer. Very well written. I hope you comeback with a new story

What an excellent story.