All Comments on 'The Way of War Pt. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A great read, great story - but I suspect you're a victim of autocorrect

Ari chuckled, "Well let me introduce you to our third member, you already know Stanley. This is Professor David Wiseman, he's head of archaeology at Tel Aviv University, but also a very fine Cardiologist and has produced most of the maps you see on the table."

Cartographers make maps. Cardiologists repair hearts.

The title of Cartologist, has fallen out of favour.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Small correction

Have read all your stories and look forward to more. Seldom find any flaws but feel I need to point out one in this part.

www.merriam-webster.com/

Definition of cardiology: the study of the heart and its action and diseases

Definition of cartographer: one that makes maps

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
1911's

Semi-automatic please. 5 stars.

Dick

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