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Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Female domination is really not my cup of tea. Didn't understand the angle of Kelly as a character in the story. She's been along the other two all the way. Then suddenly she's pulled out. It all felt out of place.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Oh no

Including Kelly were good. The spanking and Cathy fucking Brad were a turn off.

rayirony over 4 years ago

Sensual, sexy and healthy, 5*!

Just please look up the conjugations of the word "lay"...

The misuse breaks the narrative flow.

But don't stop writing.

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