All Comments on 'The Wedding Pt. 05'

I hadn't read any of your stories before, now I know why you only have a few followers after submitting 23 stories.

Well. Opinions vary.

mewled weakly

This character coming across as extremely lame. His friend noisy and he corny for telling everything.

Well, thank you. I'm a girl. He's a guy. I'm trying my best to project how a guy thinks at times. He's not always macho.

You succeed quite well in how you paint him as a guy. The first anonymous is WAY off base.

Lisa and Artie make a well-matched couple for sure!

I was quite concerned about what terms Lisa would suggest, but after reading them, they're very reasonable and it is CLEAR Lisa will have Artie for herself and not allow him to bond with Nicole nor for Nicole to bond with him. For something that could have been a minefield, you navigated it well. :)

I'm really enjoying this series!!