All Comments on 'The Well Endowed Photographer Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love how this story is going 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Barry is a lucky guy 5 Stars looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Enjoying this well written story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Will Barry have Jo and Kay in a threesome?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Keep up this great storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a terrific series.

Well written and highly erotic.

Thanks for your prose.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 1 year ago

Loving the series. I hope it goes on a long time. And I love the focus you put on the female endowment. Very nice.

davp6255davp6255about 1 year ago

Barry the well endowed photographer or just a sex mad pervert with a big dick?? loving this so far keep the story going though I'm not a fan of big tits keep em cumin

Lee2012Lee2012about 1 year ago

Believe I am coming around to the UK method of articulating and this makes fir a better read if your work. Though not my main object of “affection”, I do so enjoy the bounty. If I may, the second chapter contains no iteration of verbalizing, I offer inly as constructive. The use of apostrophes to denote a nonverbal sentence as a thought and the quotation marks as in this chapter tremendously kept me flowing along. Keep the tits jiggling and, by all means, show your diversity in model choices really gets the juices flowing. Excellent job pampering and complimenting your ladies!

dudley_tundishdudley_tundishabout 1 year ago

Not well written. Grammar and punctuation need a lot of work. Very contrived, trite plot.

MorbidromanticMorbidromantic11 months ago

I loved it. It pushed the right buttons to turn me on. Well done!! 5 * from me.

AmbulAmbul4 months ago

Fabulous. Well-hung Barry is a great glamour photography and with his personality and big tool, manages to get all of his voluptuous models into his bed, and they crave more of his cock. What a wonderful fantasy story.

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