by allison22
As ever, an acute understanding of the submissive mind, like the verbal interplay between submissives too.
Well, that is certainly one way of giving the story a whole new direction and energy! The fact that if she does not behave can cause more time to be added to her slave contract is a bit of a surprise, but also helps to keep her motivated! I do wonder if her main owner will decide her slave contract needs to be extended by a month to make up for the time she was off, with someone else, having "fun" without them being involved or present :)
This may have been humiliating and painful but also welcoming and exhilarating for her. Heather is now living a darkly exciting and arousing life, and I for one am jealous of her.
Her slavery is strictly temporary. All sales at the slave auction are good for thirty days. Then Laura and the other slaves go back to whence they came.
I liked that more psychological depth has been added to the characters....a bit worried that old is equated with cold and ugly though
It was very well written; the only criticism I have is the author did not refer to a female's cunt as a cunt.