All Comments on 'The Whole Nine Yards Ch. 01'

Brilliant, thanks for the effort and work you put into these stories. BG in the UK

The next chapter of this story is submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

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I think I missed something somewhere. What ABOUT Inga Gundotter? Last we heard of her and her recovery plight ICs Wife called him and said something about her. Did I miss something?

there is nothing to accomplish with individual psyches versus mob mentality. TK U MLJ LV NV

So Good . And I also kept getting the feeling that I needed an update about Inga . Not that you left her out . But I guess we want to know how her recovery is going . I also wonder if Breonna had always been so tainted . Or was she being molded by Carmella or the like ? Her ignorance is a shame .

Woah! Lost of words I'm shocked at her (Breonna) words that was the last words I expected to hear(in the case read)...She's... Radicalized!

Great story as always...

Great chapter! You keep using the image of a triphammer to hit something being crushed. I was not familiar with this machinery. I googled it. In today’s age with hydraulic crushing equipment, its use is very limited. Is this your use of bygone age to illustrate the complete crushing of the subject matter when you use the term.

Just an old NE boy not use to southern lingo.😀

*****Thanks for sharing.