All Comments on 'The Wings of Ilium'

A damn good read. If this really is your first story on here, I would say you’ve hit the ground running. Keep up the good work, a clear five stars.

Fantastic story! As markelly states, you have a knack. Go with it!

Thanks @markelly.

I certainly added a degree of difficulty by writing a Bostonian in the 1st person. I'm Australian, and my volunteer editor is Canadian, so I hope we threshed out all the 'Commonwealth English' usage between us. (My next work will be set in Australia - much easier for me.)

Very good start! Please let us read some more of your work. 5 stars

Amazing. What could have been a disaster was handled with sensitivity and understanding. Though none of the readers are likely to ever experience such an event, it achieves a special place on my personal bucket list. Perhaps the most incredible part of this story is that a marriage could not only survive this, but expand and revitalize with it.

On a sexual level, this should give us hope.

Sexual assault after sexual assault on his wife and he just stands there. Without consent it is rape and she did not give consent to anything until she gave the blowjob which was cheating, but the cuck was not protesting.

Thank you @herrhook, for reading and commenting.

This was originally intended to be a Loving Wives story, but not one that ends with the cheater being divorced and humiliated – which seems to be demanded by a vocal subset of LW-category trolls. Hence my choice to post under Group Sex. This was my first ever story, so I wanted to avoid that hate.

I did want to write about a couple in a successful marriage – neither of whom were seeking outside involvement of voyeurs, swingers, Internet-strangers controlling robotic sex toys, etc. – and see if I could put them in a situation that might (believably) subvert their monogamy.

(Hmm. New story idea – Internet-strangers controlling robotic sex toys… :-)

Superb writing, thank you for sharing.

Excellent. Masterful writing. Its not easy to have multiple characters in a short story and keep them distinct. I was fascinated by the character of Katherine, and would have prefered a tighter focus on her, but that just reflects my preferences, its not a criticism. its great to have new, sophisticated author who knows how to write for Adults! Thank you,

Great story, smart and well written!

Wow...

Wow. Great great stuff.

Just found your stories! Love them all!