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by kilroy_ccxiv

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
thanks

an enjoyable story so far - look forward to more!

Cooch6512Cooch6512almost 12 years ago
Interesting..

I like the beginning. You need to proofread a bit more. Quite a few simple mistakes...but then I am not an English teacher either!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good start

But you need an editor.

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