All Comments on 'The Woman on the Bus Ch. 05 (Alt)'

When did she get a car if she's been riding the bus all this time?

Definitely still too much to be told to end it here. I love this story.

I prefer the other chapter 5 and I cannot wait to see how that carries on.

This was ok but a little sudden and abrupt.

liked the other ending better,then this one.

I felt otherwise to the comments I read below. I went ahead and read the follow on chapters, but came back to this ending as the one I wanted. I guess I am just a romantic at heart over sex, but this ending is perfect for me. To each their own.