by cupbearer
It felt odd reading it but ,it was so well written so I continued. Interesting that it was a male instead of a female. I think I'll read more and see how it goes. Only read one similar to this one. But much less violent in the beginning.
I think you did a wonderful in writing this !!! 5 stars
You lost some points for the unnesasaray blasphemy... but it's not like it wasn't expected from the description, and it was easily skipped...
4/5
Well written, provocative and sexy but also thought provoking. Good job!