All Comments on 'The World Ends with Aliens Ch. 01'

You may consider getting an editor -- there were some pronoun mixups (he/she) that were pretty jarring. At several points, I wasn't sure what was happening to which character. Otherwise, it looks like an interesting premise.

1: Please find an editor!

2: Great storyline

3: I love all of the possibilities and directions this storyline can take and go to

4: Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories with us!!!

How long before you decide to write the next chapter? And who cares if there are grammar errors...