by RabbleLaid
Open the email. Please!!! Aubrey rules! Great writing, great story. Please more Aubrey and her bitch Beth.
Nicely done. Well written and pretty hot. Aubrey, although a nasty charecter, also sounds quite irrisistable, I would love to read more about her, and the things she makes Beth do.
One observation though: Beth is described as a bit ditsy, I'd be inclined to say she's as dumb as a bag of nails. Danny is probably better off without her. But then I'd guess he'd miss out on all the delicious torment.
Love stories like this. Someone devious whispering word or encouragement where they shouldn’t be, because the vileness brings them off. Good job adding you are a favourite.
Probably just casually letting him know that She is pimping Beth out now and keep all the money.
Thanks for the feedback everyone! It was my first try at a story, but it was fun to write. I'm still thinking of new evil plans for Aubrey, but I doubt that she is finished with Dan and Beth.
I think it would be really sweet if Aubrey eventually fell in love with Dan and they got together.
I loved this!
Could you write another version of the same events from Beth and Aubrey’s point of views?
Great story love the details! Can't wait to read more from you. The poor guy never stood a chance in it.
Not usually into cuckong but the way you built the manipulation and humiliation was pure art
I'd honestly quite like a sequel, sidequel, follow-up to this. Short, not-so-sweet but really hit the spot.
Zero fucking stars. What this,author wrote is kidnapping and rape. Some tasty fucking shit.