All Comments on 'The Wrestler Pt. 03'

Fantastic loved it more more please gran was so hot, I only wish I had had a grann like her. Can't what until next chapter

This is one of the best stories I have ever read on here.

PLEASE continue with their love story.

I'm out. Figured it was headed this way when she read the letter from the doc. Shame. Was a hot story until you added another dude. Creepy, and it sort of destroys the connection between the two principal characters.

Amazing! It gets better and better. Your writing style is one of the best I've seen. Please keep posting!

Great story. I love Kurt being the "bull" and cucking Bill while he had his way with Sally and Barb. I hope we get more of Kurt, May, and Barb together. Although I do prefer younger guys with grannies, Sally was an excellent addition. I hope to see more granny and grandson couples or more grannies for Kurt and Barb to play with. Would love to see how they'd interact with other grandson and grandma couples. That would be an interesting conversation as well as seeing how they navigate their relationship. Anyway, keep up the great work.

Liked it a lot better with just the two of them...

Hope this story isn’t over, your stories do end kind of abruptly.

First off, Barb is dumb as fuck. Riding up to the gates of the compound, that entire situation reeked to high heaven of human trafficking. The reality wasn't much better. To each their own, but sharing is pretty lame IMO, especially when we haven't really seen much relationship building between the main protagonists.

Second, there were honestly places where this felt like AI writing. Couple times where dialogue was repetitive enough that a human author would've noticed it and changed the wording to have more variety. Not to mention Sally orgasming for literally no reason while in the hot tub which is a common thing AI does in sex scenes with more than two characters.

I generally really enjoy your stuff, but you've definitely done better.