All Comments on 'The Wrong Room Ch. 03'

i went to film schol and did a lot of script writing, and so far this story is one of the most fluid and cinematic narratives I've ever seen on this website. I would make this movie so fucking quick. Keep it up!

Need chapter 4 soon...

...Its many notches above ...above Lit ...far above ...above writing I saw you present just 6 months ago. This sabbatical supercharged you Dream. I am... stunned at the writing I can see here. Now... howzat for a comment? Its all true hun. Cheers! --- Josie

I totally agree with Josie, your study and practice in writing has paid off tenfold! This is truly not only a notch above Lit. but in a notch all by itself.

I also agree with anon. as your writing style and prowess makes this, and so many of your current stories cinematic. I know they create a movie in my head as I follow your character growth and story and plot twists. The flow is superb and each chapter in this now epic journey gets better and pulls me into the wonderful lives and budding relationship of Mike and Allison. I know I love to 'be' with them in this story, want to learn more about them.

Thank you for letting us in on this beautiful adventure in romance!

cliptoe

I read have everything you submitted, and have enjoyed it all. I look forward to more in the line and hope for other chapter in your older stories. love the people you have us meet.

Loved it. Xxxxxx

Pleasee !!!!!

we get to the sweet romance

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