All Comments on 'The Young Man's Boat - Re-imagined'

by Andrew1968

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Leanne needs to soon have a baby bump from David!

GrendelpuppyGrendelpuppyover 2 years ago

I think I liked the original better, but still 5 stars.

SleeplessinMD4SleeplessinMD411 months ago

This story strikes at the heart of the cuckold lifestyle. What use is Matt in Leanne's life? The story ceased to be erotic with 4 females chasing after one guy equivalent to a tale of rutting animals. You really can not be sorry for Matt since he is both a fool and a clown who stands around providing entertainment for the women enjoying his humiliation. This revised story went on and on whereas the original promised that perhaps the husband take some action to gain his self respect. In this revised story Matt gets turned off with David fucking his wife.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuy8 months ago

A few complaints here but trying not to be what you consider rude.

The sex party was far too overdone and felt drug out

I don’t personally agree with the abuse draped on the husband by the wife. I get that you like the humiliation aspect but that is difficult to believe any guy would let that happen. Literary license aside this was difficult digest

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Sorry.....did not enjoy the read at all. Kept waiting for the poor guy to get a set of balls and get rid of the slut.

I guess the old man is as bad as the son !!!

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