All Comments on 'The Zip Files Bk. 02: Zip Does Gymnasts Ch. 04'

These Zip Files are great fun and I'm absolutely loving little miss Summer. Can't wait to see that precious, perfectly honed body she's been working on for north of a decade sacrificed to make Zip a baby or three. She'd be just about perfect if she wasn't quite so bossy, and I'd wager that becoming a teenage mommy (after getting all three of her holes absolutely wrecked) might well help her address that particular character flaw.

I know this series is about Zip bagging dozens of different girls, but it would be nice to see him actually keep Summer around as some sort of girlfriend even if it's covert at first.

Hey, Anon!

Glad to hear you're liking Summer. She's a bit of a departure for me; arguably the first girl I've written who is intended to seem like someone Zip, and by extension the reader, would want to be in a relationship with and not just want to fuck. So if she's getting that sort of reaction that's encouraging.

Which isn't to say she's intended to be perfect. You call her bossy and, yeah, having a clear idea of what she wants and how she intends to get it is absolutely intended to be part of her character. Possibly to a fault.

(Though if you think Summer is bossy, well… wait and see.)

As to what happens with her, I won't say - that would be deep into spoilers. I will make one general comment on timelines though.

I haven't given hard and fast dates. But, for reference, a typical US school year is 36 weeks. Zip clearly didn't get his powers right at the start of the school year, so you can infer he has around about 30 weeks remaining. Just enough to hit his goal of nailing the 28 remaining girls in his class if he maintains a pace of about one a week. Which, since many escapades including this one occur on weekends, is likely the fastest pace he can manage. Not that he is guaranteed to achieve that goal, of course - things could go very wrong. But let's say for the sake of argument that he does.

By contrast, a typical full-term pregnancy is 40 weeks. Anything less than 37 is considered premature. Less than 30 is technically possible but very rare, high risk even with good modern medicine, and will likely result in several weeks spent in the NICU.

So while Zip putting buns in ovens is absolutely a consequence we will get to, actual babies and parenthood are, in story terms, likely still many many episodes away.

Even outward physical changes, while closer, will take a bit. As a very general rule, women don't tend to show much at all during first trimester and are visibly pregnant in third, while second tends to be quite variable. Some ladies show earlier and more than others, for a whole host of reasons. So even that might take a bit, in terms of episode count.

Of course, those aren't the only signs. Missed or late periods start to get very noticeable a couple weeks after conception, usually followed shortly by positive pregnancy tests. If Zip maintains his current course we ought to be seeing those quite shortly…

Again, not saying anything about what will happen with Summer. Just some food for thought. We will get to what you want in general terms, but it just may take quite a few chapters to get there. Hope you keep enjoying things, regardless of any twists still remaining along the way.

Yes, I'm quite familiar with the details of pregnancy, my own headline story is specifically mapped out so that I can schedule the timeline of chapters to coincide with the appropriate stages/symptoms. So no, unfortunately none of Zip's conquests are likely to give birth before graduation. But one can still build up to that.

In terms of Summer specifically, things actually line up quite spectacularly. One can generally assume an American school starts in mid August. From there youa dd a month for Zip to get his powers and another two weeks for the events of the previous chapter and this one, that slots the current events somewhere around the end of September. Now, the average American woman will start showing a visible baby bump sometime in the range of 13-15 weeks. From that starting point you can shave off a week or two because Summer is (theoretically) a first time mother whose slender enough to be a top notch gymnast. Then you can shave off another week or two because that weekly timeline is actually measured from the end of a woman's previous period rather than the harder to pin down date of conception. As such, should Summer get knocked up the very first time she spreads her legs for Zip (fingers crossed) 10-12 weeks from the end of september would make it line up so that she started showing right around the beginning of Winter break. So here's hoping that actually happens and we wind up with a nice 'Christmas present' themed chapter scene around that point.

Naturally, this is of course your story to do what you like with, not mine, so all of this is entirely theoretical and things could go completely off the rails by this point. But, my headcanon cannot be stopped from firing no matter what you do! (Fun fact, by the end of book 3 that HC has Erika, Summer and one of the virginal Wild Girls as having been knocked up. Plus maybe the redheaded WG. Though, now that I've read the next chapter I'm pretty sure a handful of stuck up Playa girls will be making the list. Definitely looking forward to that one.)