All Comments on 'Thea and Brad Ch. 02'

by Timewell

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TimewellTimewellover 9 years agoAuthor

There are a few typos that I missed in my original proofread. Apologies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great series!

Well written and very hot!! Thanks for the great stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Dumb brad. Did he get an anvil dropped on his head? You don't need this shit

FailedscoutFailedscoutover 9 years ago
Enjoyed

I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter. What type of instructions was he receiving from the tapes?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Mmmm

This was a lovely story in a verrrry moving series.

I loved the dialogue! The narrative insight into the characters' thoughts was deeply erotic. It was such a well developed relationship, and you let us see the transition. Mmmm. Thanks for that.

I see it is a recent work for you. I'm hopeful you'll add to it. Sequel and prequel possibilities abound!

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