by Timewell
There are a few typos that I missed in my original proofread. Apologies.
Dumb brad. Did he get an anvil dropped on his head? You don't need this shit
I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter. What type of instructions was he receiving from the tapes?
This was a lovely story in a verrrry moving series.
I loved the dialogue! The narrative insight into the characters' thoughts was deeply erotic. It was such a well developed relationship, and you let us see the transition. Mmmm. Thanks for that.
I see it is a recent work for you. I'm hopeful you'll add to it. Sequel and prequel possibilities abound!