These Two Pt. 01

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Two strangers in a cafe. Affection? Passion? Inspiration?
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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 07/29/2023
Created 03/13/2023
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She was sitting by the window in a small coffee house, stirring her coffee, black and strong, just like her thoughts were. She wished they would be just as shallow as this small cup of espresso, and not so dangerously deep and consuming. Her book remained closed and was looking at her from the table with some rebuke.

He has been watching her for a while, taken in by her soft charm and curious what was it, exactly, that caught his attention. She was not some extraordinary beauty, but maybe it was the amber shining in her hair, when the sun was touching it... or the way her hand was laying on that book, her fingers drawing something unconsciously on the cover... or her capturing eyes, deemed with something that was on her mind... And, of course, her curves. Come on, he was still a man, after all.

She finally took her eyes off the cup and looked at the table. Smiled sadly to her book, ran the fingers along the cover and thought: "Sorry, Paris, not today". She loved to wander along the streets of that city with Ernest, walking by his side, seeing it with his eyes, smelling with his nose, feeling with his hands, lips, tongue... every line, every page making her sense, making her feel. It usually helped to travel so far away from all the troubles that she could barely find the way back. But today was not the day, obviously. She sighed and took the first sip of her coffee, looking out the window, then her eyes travelled slowly around the room.

He could not believe a simple act of drinking can be so sexual. Her fingers wrapping the cup firmly. Her lips embracing the white edge, slowly diving into a hot depth. Her eyes closing with this bitter pleasure. The tip of her tongue licking the drops left on her lips... He swallowed and tried to calm down, but his imagination was already giving him mental pictures of those lips touching his instead of that cup. He suddenly felt the overwhelming itch to draw. Had not felt it in more than a year... His hand reached for his backpack, but stopped halfway, as her eyes finally met his.

She was trapped. Her soul captured by this dark abyss of his eyes. Their depth seemed endless and somehow, she felt that his gaze burnt a sign on her heart. She did not remember anyone to look at her like that, with a hidden fire. These flames were dancing deep inside, almost invisible, and only the play of shadows on the background of those eyes was the hint of their presence. And stories. Oh, there were so many stories those eyes could tell the one who could read. And God knows, she could. She has been a reader her whole life.

He used to think the depth could only be found in the dark. The light things could be seen all the way through the bottom, keeping no secrets, unable to hide anything, leaving no space to curiosity and wander. Then how was it possible, that the melted pearls of her light grey eyes were so mystique, so intriguing, so...unrevealing. Yes, that was the word. Like it was just a thin still layer, covering the storming waves of the deep ocean. He could not take his eyes from hers, trying to catch all he could, all the transitioning of colors, all moves, all highlights, absorb all the feelings they have awaken in him and wondering if he ever will be able to put it all on his paper.

A slight smile touched her lips when she thought about how much it reminded her reading a really good book. When you are eager to go on and on, to follow the story and get to the end, but you forcibly stop yourself to prolong this joy. That's what she felt finally taking her eyes off his and sliding down his face. She imagined how his thin lips would feel on the bare skin of her shoulder and the long-asleep butterflies in her stomach suddenly woke up and stretched their wings. Touching his bristle with her lips, following its neat line on his jaw... And then his hands... The thought of his hands on her body immediately gave her goosebumps. Her hand slowly ran up her forearm, covering the shivers.

When her eyes finally released him, his hand reached the backpack and took off his notebook and a pencil. He had to transfer this itch in his hands and in his mind to the paper. He had to draw, or it would drive him mad. But while his hands were busy with preparing to engage in the magic, his eyes were still following her. Soft lips smiling... the smile so light and playful that it could only mean one thing. But is it possible, that she is... No, he should not follow that road now. Her neck open in the cut of her purple shirt, pale skin gratefully absorbing the sunlight playing on it through the window. The silver chain running down under the shirt and through the twists of his imagination, right between what looked like a pair of large full and soft breasts under the fabric. He felt the growing in his jeans as he was thinking of touching that velvet skin and feeling it not just with his fingers, but with his most sensitive and now hard part. His hands were burning, and since he could not touch her in real, the only way to put this fire out was in his drawing. He opened his notebook, and his pencil began its journey on the paper.

She saw him watching her, followed his gaze and the warm wave rushed through her body, as she felt his affection and excitement. She recognized the tremor she saw in his fingers. It was easy. She knew that feeling. The itch that was burning its way out the mind and soul to the fingertips and out into this world. That's why she was so captured. That what trapped her. The similar flames of their inner worlds. His was burning in his drawing. Hers overflowed her mind with scenes and stories. She smiled and reached to her laptop. Opening a blank sheet and typing the first word felt like meeting a soulmate's lips for the first time. Careful, slow, and light touch, which just consumes you and several moments later you are drowning.

They were sitting in the crowded café, divided by the space, tables, chairs, passages, and still touching each other with their eyes, their moves, their minds. Glancing at him over her screen. Raising up his head from the paper to have a look at her. Unconscious smiles on their lips. Their fingers moving slowly at first. Her legs crossing and thighs pressing to each other. His hand secretly touching the crotch under the table. The words and drawing flowing faster... The tip of her little finger sliding in her mouth, while thinking about a phrasing... His hand squeezing while considering the lights and shadows on his drawing... Faster... Her deep heavy breathing... Drops of sweat on his forehead...

The waitress came up to take the empty cups and had a glance at her writing. Looked at her curiously and moved on. More cups, his table. A glance at his drawing, and the waitress raises her eyebrows and looks back at the girl astonished. Opened her mouth to tell him what she saw just across the room, but then decided it was not her place to say anything and just went away. When the kitchen door closed behind her, she put the tray on the table and fell on the chair, thinking about those two and the things she saw. How is it possible that the girl was writing the same story the guy was drawing? And what a hot story! She shook her head and glanced on those two through the small window in the door.

The girl and the guy. One last glance, one last word, one last line. The climax... Two pairs of eyes closing and two deep sighs escaping the lips across the room. Bodies relaxing. Minds coming to senses.

She puts her book in the bag, closes and grabs the laptop, smiles to him on her way out.

He puts away his notebook, smiles to her as she passes by and smells her fresh perfume.

The waitress wipes the tear off her cheek and wonders if she will ever feel like that with anyone in her life, and if these two will ever meet again. She thinks so. And maybe even in this café.

10/03/2023

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This was just outstanding. I love the juxtaposition of him sketching while she writes. I think that's an amazing illustration of how we all express ourselves sexually in unique ways.

Very bittersweet, making me want to read more...

BodingtonBodingtonabout 1 year ago

A most excellent piece of prose containing excellent vivid imagery to highlight the erotic thoughts of the characters. You have the makings of embellishing your story into a terrific and intriguing novel. I hope you succeed in such endeavor if that is your ultimate goal.

To encourage you I'd like to recount my own experience in writing. I had read Thomas Hardy's "Tess of the d'Urbervilles" while in college taking an English novel course. In that novel there is a scene described where the seducer of the heroine gazes upon her as she was milking a cow. Rather than pressing her forehead against the flank of the cow as was the normal custom of milchers, Tess rested her entire side of her face against the cow and was presumably daydreaming while engaged in her chore. The sight was so enthralling to the seducer that it was the catalyst for him to force her into having sexual intimacies.

Bear in mind that this novel was published in 1891/1892 right in the heart of the Victorian era of modesty and high restrictive morals. Consequently, this novel is devoid of the kind of graphic descriptions contained in today's erotic literature. And yet this has been to my mind one of the most erotic thought-provoking scenes I've ever had the pleasure of reading.

So this was my idea to replicate the scene aided greatly by the freedom of describing the action in stark graphic terms. Since Wisconsin is the state of the United States most renowned for its dairy farm industry. I had the setting for my novel. Since nowadays because of its efficiency cows are milked by machines rather than by hand. so I had to come up with a plausible reason for my heroine to be seen milking a cow the old fashioned way. And from there I was off to the races in concocting a full-fledged plot, and you can read the results on this site.

In your case you have the male character, presumably an artist and the female character presumably a writer gazing at each other in a crowded café and enchanted with what they see, each incorporating their intimate thoughts into their craft. As a clever twist you have a third party, their mutual serving waitress witnessing and recognizing the similarity of their thoughts expressed in their different artistic format.

Now from there you can flesh out their vocations and elaborate on why they were in that particular café. Of course. details of their separate backgrounds would be helpful in order to establish why they were attracted to each other. Then you'll have them again meeting not necessarily in the same café and the only restrictions of the subsequent storyline will be the limits of your imagination.

Good luck!

RynaRinkRynaRinkabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you all for your comments and such high rates. I did not expect that, but it is so encouraging and motivates to take further steps on this writing path.

@tonydxx Yes, it is really my first complete story. Thank you for your feedback :) I am already thinkikg through the next one and hope it will be on soon

tonydxxtonydxxabout 1 year ago

Your bio says that you're making first steps in writing. If these really are first steps, they are extraordinarily good. I look forward to more. 5.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Been there, done that. What a story!

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