All Comments on 'They Came Together'

Good premise.

But sex is too abrupt. Too automatic.

Needed something before she took his cock in her mouth. Dialog about what he wanted her to do, perhaps? More in the way of preliminaries. He could have told her to feel his cock with her hands first. To play wth it. To show him how much she wanted it. He could have asked her if she was wet. Take her fingers and get them wet from her pussy. Lick them.

Three stars.

Hot like you

I liked this.

The intensity of the relationship is well defined.

The sex scene is well written and reflects their relationship.

Yes, you aroused me!

Would enjoy seeing these two have sex in a variety of settings.

oooh loved it... one scene ... end to end!!

Amazing story made me hard as a rock! Good little slut.

Pretty realistic. Reading it, has sparked in me...the raw desire...the search for my mature pet. Great attention to details.

OMG

What a fantastic story. I love the way the dom/sub relationship is so loving.