All Comments on 'They Seduce the Neighbor'

by rosebudliquor

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lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

very good. Each other's wingman

SB_UKSB_UKover 1 year ago

This is an incredibly well written story! Great use of language and imagery, without being too pompous or baroque. I really liked it 😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

Sex rushed. Lacks step-by-step details.

Four stars.

slapnuts69slapnuts69over 1 year ago

I really enjoyed the story. The pacing was perfect, you seduced the reader with the story. Thanks for sharing!

OmenainenOmenainenover 1 year ago

Well this was juicy! I loved the premise and the feel of the story. And the sex positivity. I’m sure I had a dog named Rufus in one of mine, was that a coincidence or have you been reading mine? Anyway, thank you for participating in my event :-)

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royaleover 1 year ago

Terrific! Your writing style is a lot like mine. Making the sex scene hotter with good dialog and dirty talk rather than (lol) step-by-step details. 5 easy stars from me, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What an awesome well described love scene! Perfect, I could feel the emotion between all three, along with a little humor which was enlightening as well as the sex actually happening. Beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow, hot as hell sex with your neighbor! Doesn’t get any better than that! Beautiful story and wonderful writing.

KurichanKurichanabout 1 year ago

Hot, hi or, hot!

horizontaldhorizontald12 months ago

5th star for the "praise goddess"

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