by rosebudliquor
This is an incredibly well written story! Great use of language and imagery, without being too pompous or baroque. I really liked it 😊
I really enjoyed the story. The pacing was perfect, you seduced the reader with the story. Thanks for sharing!
Well this was juicy! I loved the premise and the feel of the story. And the sex positivity. I’m sure I had a dog named Rufus in one of mine, was that a coincidence or have you been reading mine? Anyway, thank you for participating in my event :-)
Terrific! Your writing style is a lot like mine. Making the sex scene hotter with good dialog and dirty talk rather than (lol) step-by-step details. 5 easy stars from me, well done.
What an awesome well described love scene! Perfect, I could feel the emotion between all three, along with a little humor which was enlightening as well as the sex actually happening. Beautiful!
Wow, hot as hell sex with your neighbor! Doesn’t get any better than that! Beautiful story and wonderful writing.