All Comments on 'Thin Line Between'

Wonderful story! Love how you went from role-playing through drama to real love and... again role-playing in the end! The whole story is an unique mix of sweet and spicy.

@Marasso

Thank you so much for your kind words, I appreciate it so much, yes I wanted it to be this a bit awkward mix of role-play and steamy sex, I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Wow! Superb story! There was everything - kinks, passion, love, drama, but also respect and care! Characters felt so real. What a rare addition to the Trans category.

So, so, so hot! I loved the last roleplays, nicely done :)

This was so amazing! Very sweet, funny and romantic. You did such a great job establishing the characters and making me care about both Braxton and Rain individually and as a couple. This story was such a joy to read and I'm just so impressed by your incredible talent and growth as a writer. There are so many delicious wordplays sprinkled throughout this and it's so clear that you really took your time and put a lot of care into this story, that you weren't just writing it one-handed, but that you actually put a lot of heart and effort into it. TBH your talent and intelligence is a huge turn on for me and you continue to be the greatest writer on this site in my eyes <3

wow that was hotter than expected, fine job

There is so much good in this story - real insight into characters' wrestling with image and identity, insecurity and determinism (?)... I'm over-explaining the truth that I loved this story! Thank you so much.

@Anon

"What a rare addition to the Trans category."

Thank you so much, I always feel like I don't exactly belong with my love for romantic elements, but comments like yours make me want to write even more, in hope of finding readers such as yourself! :)

@Gaybriel,

I added the last role-play just at the end of my writing, feeling that it would be somewhat weirdly cut without any kinky conclusion - if I would just stop at the sex scene in their room. So, I'm glad you liked it!

@trappedinthecl0set

Thank you so much for these kind words, it means so much coming from such a good author as yourself.

I didn't write it with one hand... mostly :D I do not deserve such pleasant compliments, leave some also for such a great authors as drHenderson or DAMackey here on Lit or - they are true masters! :)

@anon, I'm glad I surprised you :)

@anon You over-explained it in the most sweet way, thank you wholeheartedly!

I resonated with this. I will admit, I have given pics to people I shouldn't have and shown my face and body to those same people and they were just egotistical jerks who got off on spooking people like me. Thankfully I'm fine and I didn't reveal any info or click any links but a recent experience and this experience really woke up my eyes to lewd stuff online. I just do lewd stuff now in a very contained and well managed discord server so dw, am doing good now :)) thank you for the story :3

Fantastic!!

Well done! The reality is that there interplay between the very very common “rape” fantasies of many gurls and the reality that they do not want to be brutalized. I suspect that is because to some extent society tells us we are “supposed to be” masculine even though we clearly are not. The ambivalence, and the lack of respect for trans and CDs in the larger community fuses the sense of shame and our baseline sexuality into a fantasy desire to be dominated and dare I say it be “raped” or at least aggressively used by a man

I think many of us often suffer from self image problems—so that we think this is the only way that we can hope to achieve intimacy. Your story illustrates this-and how a basically very decent guy can overcome the worst impact of such beliefs-yet still preserve part of the kinky fantasy that motivates so many of us

@Anon

I know what you mean; I've also experienced some unpleasant situations. It's better to err on the safe side :)

@Tymak8

Thank you :)

@Anon

Yes, I've heard before that some transgirls and closeted gay people often feel "undeserving" of love, commitment, and respect in relationships. It makes me sad just thinking about it. This isn't how it's supposed to be; every person deserves to find their perfect match and have a fulfilling relationship if that's what they want! :)

Really well written, with a perfect pace, I enjoyed this one so much, thanks for writing.

@Dani_does_Dallas

I'm happy you liked it! It's a precious compliment from you! :)

I LOVED the movie "Secretary"!!!!!! Oh and your stories.

@David_Brock Haha, I'm glad you liked the movie, I liked it too ;) It was an inspiration for this story :D