All Comments on 'Thirty Three'

by Mr. Unsexy

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
A very entertaining story...

and I'm so glad that you enjoyed the smell of her 'panties'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Oh. My. God. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What Happened

What ever happened to Jeff and Karen. We, the readers need to know. Needs more for THE END

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Well done

Enjoyable story and well written, who wouldn't want to pounce on a 19 year old hotty

More!!!!

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 2 years ago

Well that just left us hanging. Maybe it was Barny with a gun waking Jeff up after he figured out what had happened, or maybe when Karen turns up pregnant. Lots of holes in the story, but it is fiction.

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