All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 09'

Shock ending! - but life can be like that.

WOW!!! This chapter's got my own memories, fantasies and this story swirling around in my head. Right now, in my mind I've replaced the coach with a Phis Ed teacher I crushed on. Nothing ever happened with him, but I've jacked to his image for years wishing it had. As for David, I'm not sure this would have turned out differently if he'd had been truthful with the coach, but he now knows he fucked up by lying. It's probably time to talk with Philip and ask his advice. That, or just go to the coach, apologize for lying and tell him the truth. Once again, I'm left on the edge of my seat wanting to know what will happen next in this great story. Thanks, MLF

While it may seem that the coach is putting all the blame for their sexual exploration on David when he was the pursuers and that feels like unfair punishment, the fact is David is lying to coach and he can’t be trusted. Coach seems to be picking up on the lack of trust and can’t put himself at risk like that. That’s a shame because to me, the willingness, intimacy and reciprocation between these two is so much hotter than the dom/sub and BDSM stuff with Philip. Bummer.

Perhaps Philip will give coach a chance till read Dave's report to allay coach's fears. It pretty clear coach was hoping to stretch Dave's manginity, before he got cold feet

Another amazing chapter with a novel twist at the end. I do hope there is a way for reconciliation between coach and David, as I think (my thoughts only) that Coach would be a better mate for David than Phillip. Maybe both can stay in his life. They both have attributes and David can learn a lot about himself and how to properly serve and be served. Hope to see where this goes next. Thank you for bringing this story to life, slowly.